All of the sources I used in my argument are credible
sources written by qualified author(s) and published in credible peer-reviewed
journals. Further, the six sources included in my paper supply all of the
information I need…or so I thought. One part of my argument may need to be
reworked, and if so, I may need some additional evidence. The following article
deals with how the gut-brain axis effects schizophrenia and includes much discussion on the link between gluten-relate disorders and schizophrenia.
Nemani, Katlyn, et al. "Schizophrenia And The Gut–Brain
Axis." Progress In Neuropsychopharmacology & Biological Psychiatry
56.(2015): 155-160. ScienceDirect. Web. 27 Apr. 2015.
My argument deals with why people who meet certain
qualifications need to be tested for gluten. This article provides two things
to my argument. First, it provides further examples of a seemingly permanent
disease cured by going gluten-free—a sub-topic of one of my paragraphs. Second,
this article provides support for my potentially reworked paragraph, which will
include more about being tested and potential effects. Overall, this source is
a great addition to my working argument.
sounds like an interesting topic and it looks like your doing a really good job right now. keep it up.
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